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For every season there is a cycle,
for each tear shed of joy or sorrow
allows a petal's bloom when caught
beneath the soil. To waters of life
do these roots cling, harkening
toward a New Year's Spring.

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The following comments are for "Mere Thoughts"
by Tigerlily

Duly noted, and thanks. I've been kind of lax about submitting stuff lately *apologizes* due to work and whatnot, but I appreciate the comment. Thanks

( Posted by: Tigerlily [Member] On: February 17, 2004 )

Actually, I quite liked the way it was presentated. (sorry to disagree with you Pen... *grin*)

I found a rhythm to it that worked independantly of the sentence structure, and worked quite well... it gives it a slightly quirky feel, like an off-break piece of music where the beats don't fall into the normal patterns.

ps - still waiting for the next part of Mourning Glory... *hint* *hint* ;)

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: February 17, 2004 )

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