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Have you ever been a puppet without strings, and wished you were just broken
Have you ever lied lifeless, and have you ever thought you had just cried
Have you ever looked at the harlequin, his mask dyed with anguish, fear and wasted hope
And envied him, 'cause he was blessed with feelings
Have you ever wished - you had a soul

------
Stille


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