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you make me happy, you make me sad, and sometimes you make me mad. you make me feel joy, you make me feel pain, you laugh with me when we dance in the rain! your a bum, your a doll, i couldn't live without you at all!

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The following comments are for "jessie-poo, my bunka-boo!"
by Gami

Mehh, to each there own! :) no offence taken

( Posted by: Gami [Member] On: March 26, 2004 )

I love the title. It's just the kind of thing that
close couples call themselves in private-very
heartwarming. This is a great example of the term
"elegance in simplicity",something that can be
quite hard to pull off when a myriad of feelings get in the way of speaking the straightforward,
honest truth. It's also rare for someone to accept
and appreciate someone else for everything they are. Essentially it's just a cool little love letter. Good work.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: October 21, 2004 )

*giggles* I guess it could be a love letter... but it's about my son Jessie :D

( Posted by: Gami [Member] On: October 27, 2004 )

mixed messages
Oops! Sorry - It sounded like something else.
It's still so-o-o cute.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: October 27, 2004 )

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