The following comments are for "IT'S ALRIGHT" by R.K.Singh
I personally think you could add more detail to this one. It kinda leaves the reader hanging. Details would be awesome, make it longer, from this little piece here I can sense that you can write pretty well, don't cut yourself short!
Posted by: drkpoet [Member] On: February 14, 2004
It's a tanka poem, and the form needs to remain confined to five lines.
Thanks for your comments. It's indeed possible to lengthen the theme of the poem in a regular poem.
R K Singh
Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: February 14, 2004
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