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The life-weaver's cove
Resides in a dagger's glint.
Sunshine crowns the serpent's womb;
Earth's screaming horizon glides across
the forehead of a new-born being.

Swivel beneath the skin, mangled cords, bearing
Good and Evil,

Clings on the dead twin child,
The other, bloodied.

Implode the heavenly bodies.

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