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People like me never change.
It seems that i am caught,
In this weary game
Of playing someone that i'm not.
It all seems so simple.
Find the key or pick the lock,
Or build myself a fortress
With a wish inspired clock.
If only i could take it back-
All that i have done.
I wonder if my will has lost
Or if my vices won.
I've given all that i could spare,
Getting nothing in return.
All i've got are dreams....
People like me never learn.


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