A Dream
by visionsofmemoriespast (Member) - published: November 18, 2001
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Category - Poetry
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I dreamed a dream of a thousand colors,
I danced with you, and with no other.
We made circles 'round the candle flame,
the subtle hold betwixt the lover.

And of all the things I fear and bane,
What of our friendship remains the same?
The price to hold so close, my love, my dream,
This awkward dance will never tame.

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The following comments are for "A Dream"
by visionsofmemoriespast

Wow...
At first, this poem seems rigidly structured, but the complexity that lies a little deeper is wonderful. I love your use of off ryhming together with farily tight obsevation of the meter. In particular, the first stanza is perfect. I really like this piece, and can't wait to read more of your work. Keep posting!

( Posted by: The Recycled Avatar [Member] On: January 21, 2003 )

dream ON
dance! dance! this is really great..thanks for writing

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: April 11, 2004 )

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