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frost
by visionsofmemoriespast (Member) - published: November 2, 2001
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Category - Poetry
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frost tickles my nose
i wait in wind for your train
will it ever come?



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by visionsofmemoriespast

direct effect
Nice little poem you have here. I like the way you manage to tell a story without cliche in just three lines.

On a side note, unless I miscounted this piece is a haiku and we have a category for haiku and such. You might want to consider reposting this in that category.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: May 3, 2003 )





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