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Friend, you’re not the guilty one
The guilty ones are the evenings
See how they drag you down into this obscurity...
Trouble not yourself
Everyday’s "Love’s Labour Lost"
Vanishes away
Your eyes have learned
The meaning of love anyway
Learn how not to remember
Every point of suffering.

Remember not those eyes, those eyes
Have gone and they’ve enticed you into smoky cafés
Don’t go and believe
your eyes, they're just not
as sharp as they used to be
Friend, because you aren’t the guilty one,
The guilty ones are hopes
Leaving you to the shadows.

So what’s the use of fussing
If they’ve never understood
The poems your own baggy eyes
Have forgotten? ...

You’re alone in an unknown beyond
Your eyes are alone as well ...
You’re not guilty, friend
The guilty ones are hopes
Leaving you alone in darkness.

Üzeyir Lokman ÇAYCI
Translated from Turkish to French by Yakup Yurt
(followed by English translation by Richard Vallance)


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Üzeyir Lokman ÇAYCI


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The following comments are for "FRIEND, YOU'RE NOT THE GUILTY ONE"
by cerran

wow!
Wow, what a nifty-fun poem! I get a real sense of character from this, a distinct authorial voice. So rare in any poetry, no matter how good, to get such a tremendous impression of natural individuality!

This poem saunters along, drawing the reader to it effortlessy, languidly, as it imparts advice. And such advice! I wish I had friends like this . . .

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 8, 2003 )

a mature writer
Üzeyir Lokman ÇAYCI has enough experience in writing and this is obvious. I know some of his works from another poetry site (www.agonia.net) and i was impressed by him from his first post there. I'm glad to find him here!

( Posted by: inmost [Member] On: December 8, 2003 )





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