Last words of Queden
by tissue (Member) - published: October 19, 2003
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He was deceived. All were deceived. Life is everywhere, but the day will come when even the great trees of Nonbenel, ye, even the great river of the west will be silenced, and the land will experience a great and savage darkness. Hope for me is gone. My journey to the last house is ending. My eyes have grown dark, and my heart is as a stone. Fight back! The One is yet to come, so there is still hope. Hold on to Hope! For now, this is all we have. My breath is coming more slowly. Though I die, it is not in vain. I die in disgrace, however. I am not the One. There is another...

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I'm a wanna-be writer. But so was John Grisham, so who knows?

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The following comments are for "Last words of Queden"
by tissue

Nice, but. . .
this is nice, but there needs to be more to it. It sounds like the kind of thing a writer will put in her journal as an *idea* for a story. What little there is, is nicely written, though.

( Posted by: susanb55 [Member] On: November 8, 2003 )

True
It actually is an idea for a story. I decided to publish it to see what you guys might think, and perhaps receive some inspiration.

( Posted by: tissue [Member] On: November 13, 2003 )

good
i agree it is very good idea for a future story-

( Posted by: fastathanu [Member] On: November 13, 2003 )

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