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i've heard all is to whisper-& felt all is to see,
from the silence of my prayers so sure-to the dreams i came to believe,
& as the nights layed in darkness-& nothing was to touch love so near,
until i felt your heart of a kiss-to make the magic reappear,
but as something still feels so empty,
& the secrets vanished to think,
until time of tests lead to find me,
THE MISSING LOVE . . . . .
of a golden link!



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