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On the road to The Chapel
I met three men
Who didn't say some things

They nodded some heads
and blinked some eyes
and stretched out not their wings

They pointed towards a pitched pointed roof
to which was my destination
I turned to tell them 'thank you'
and took note of their admiration

The path was darker than I imagined
but I had nothing to compare
for what can one expect
when searching for
that which isn't really there

I reached the doors
in a timely manner
perhaps a year or five
So I knocked quite loudly
so Who would know
at The Chapel I'd arrived

A voice behind me shouted out
"What are you doing in here?"
I turned around
and saw a face
And all became unclear

I said "I've come to find refuge
in this fantastic place."
I said with my lips trembling
I said it to my face.

"You've got to go. You've no business here."
My face said with some disdain.
"But take me with you, when you go,
for I fear I've gone insane."


I grabbed myself by the hand
and walked up to the door.
I opened it swiftly
and to my surprise
the Chapel was no more

There I stood on the path
holding my hand in my hand quite tight
and there on my left were three dark men
pointing into to the night.

I nodded and walked
me and myself
towards the darkened shore
until I came up to a Chapel
I'm sure I've seen before.







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The following comments are for "The Chapel"
by rancidsauce

Chapel
Cool poem. I hope you find what you are searching for!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: February 10, 2010 )





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