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Stars and Hearts
dangle from strings like a puppet being manipulated by its master

And I stare
up into the heavens
wondering who it is that hurts me



Stars and Hearts
dangle from strings like a puppet being manipulated by its master

And I stare
down into my chest
wondering what it is that makes me ache



Stars and Hearts
dangle from strings like a puppet being manipulated by its master

And I stare
up into the heavens
down into my chest
wondering how I have become this mess

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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The following comments are for "Stars and Hearts"
by fbomber125

Stars
I like it - but it leaves me wanting more. I think you can really put some meat in this one. Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: February 10, 2010 )

i like it as well
a very real point of view... very human.

( Posted by: ghostpoisonsturgeon [Member] On: February 10, 2010 )





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