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To be on your mountain top
with an elevated view,
could my chances increase
for getting a glimpse of You?

Standing barefoot in your presence
before a burning bush consumed,
would your glory envelop me
as a spiritual womb?

Moses saw your backside,
but show me instead your face and eyes.
Having direct interaction with you
should cause my faith to be revised.

Conquering obstacles of Life
via a mountainous climb,
while developing a personal relationship
help makes the upward trek sublime.




From my book: Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
The ISBN is: 1-4196-5051-3

Learn more about me and my poetry at:
http://www.squidoo.com/book-isbn-1419650513/



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Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably!
--Joseph J. Breunig 3rd


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The following comments are for "Poem: On God's Mountain "
by jjbreunig3

God's Mountain Top.
We all strive to be on God's mountain top. It's in the striving that makes us stronger, and it's faith that gets us there.

Loved this Joseph...good job!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: February 6, 2010 )





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