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Clouds float up high but I’m stuck here on the ground
rocks and soil beneath my dirty feet
and if I wash them clean will they stay clean
is this fate just walking around and around
forever in circles and fog rolls on in
making it harder to think about everything that’s not wrong
but here I am again stuck in the mud
and there’s no way out no way to stay clean
I’ll be dirty forever chasing myself around
and I can’t seem to catch him
he’s just running too fast but I’m still running
fall down and get back up here it is the end of the line
I’ve trapped him in a dead end
is this life now forever the same just some race
and I had you but you got away from me
I’ll never have you again I’m so dirty my friend
I’ll be clean someday but not today I’m still dirty

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~ Brandan Michael.


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