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High up in a tree
leaves touch my skin
and every inch of me
turns to gold

Lying on the grass
images flood my mind
and I think the dam
is about to break

Dancing in the night skies
stars are my dance partners
around and around we go

Swimming in the vast space
of the unknown and
I’ll never make it to the shore

These are just a few words
a few words I’ve written
to tell others how I feel

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~ Brandan Michael.


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