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Heartbreak was something

very emotional for me.

As I was reminising of

the one I have been missing.

Often had me discourage;

not wanting to listen of

the blessings I've received.

But, sadden by things I couldn't

acheive at that particular time.

Truely, it was a crime to give

all of my heart to one guy.

Whom was shy and insecure

about himself.

Making me feel like I would be

never good enough for him.

Eventually, over time my

heart became rough.

Especially, my personality was

tough towards love and romance.

Because I felt like that maybe

I could never give

love another chance.

Through any situation and circumstance;

Knowing that love can meet you

in any conditon you are in;

Having you wishing that you had

the kind of love that

everyone else had.

Making you glad in spirit;

This was brought to my attention

by the consequences

of heartbreak mentioned.

How it affects you by teaching

you to protect your heart.

In everything you trust and know

So that you will be able to

grow closer to him.

Because eventually he will

mend and maintain your healed

heart beyond what you can explain.

------
angellica marie shackelford


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The following comments are for "Movin On With A Broken Heart"
by sierrramarie

Angel...
-stay focused on your dreams Angel. sometimes, we may write and toss a poem 10-20 times, before we get it just right. someday, somewhere... someone, is going to love you, for who you really are... inside. best wishes, and God bless.

( Posted by: moonrising36109 [Member] On: July 20, 2009 )





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