Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote I'm sorry I had no right strength presumed intellect top link in the chain all unjustified that lie that glimmer of hope fulfillment a full stomach in a harsh life Snagged hooked dragged to shore strung up to wait for your inevitable demise All unnecessary unfair unkind unforgiving A plastic tomb a propane cremation waiting for the teeth to send you back in a form belittling the former majesty and grace

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