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My feelings for you I cannot hide

I guess my emotions gave me away inside.

The more I was around you

The nervous I became.

Being with you the whole time

It changes me

It doesn't keep me the same.

My heart nearly skips a beat

I can hardly breath

At times I trip over my seat.

When your name is spoken

chills run through my spine.

Everyday I think of you

It's not a day that goes by that

I have wished for you to be mine.

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angellica marie shackelford


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