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Attitudes of the old and new clash.
First can of coffee, pop-top-open.
Food frozen from farmers toil.
Scoped-auto shotguns, hunt turkey dinners.
Kids play sewing & knitting yesterdays.
MOM, hitches buggy wagon to back,
of auto-horse.
Whiteouts partake parts of the GOV. Documents.
NOW PLAYING: [ gang leather rip offs
with kiddie porn ].
TV replaces BIBLE, for after dinner table sermons.
Candlesticks with light bulbs harness
man's progress.
Surrealism becomes light of,
yesterday's shadows.

7/3/09 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES


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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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