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Gone
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I'm lost these days without you
not knowing what to do.
Nothing feels the way it should
I don't know how to make it through.

Every promise
is now a lie.
Gone forever
it all just died.

No hope no laughter
no safety no trust.
Everything I believed in
erased as if only dust.

I love you
you swore you loved me.
Still here I am alone
was this my destiny?

I believed in forever
when whispered from your heart.
But forever's not even close
and we're here so far apart.

Why did you do this?
Why did you walk away?
I believed you and you loved me
now my heart cries and pays.

I don't know how to do this
how to live alone.
When all I want is your touch
and you to come back home.



July 2,2009

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heather kemper


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by trynfinity

Gone
Nice! I read and sing this as lyrics. Thamks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: July 3, 2009 )





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