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We do not know
who cares for us
live or dead

nor do we know
our end
now or ever

which meeting with whom
is the last
we do not know

when darkness gushes
in from the breach
sky sinks down

as stranger we come
as stranger
we pass

like withered grass
uncelebrated
unmourned, unknown


--R.K.SINGH

------
R K Singh


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The following comments are for "DEATH"
by R.K.Singh

Dr. Singh..of "death"
Writing, as does music, transcends chronological/linear age. Expression may be reflective/refractive, as well as redemptive. Our compressed representations/geometric offerings of self, can transcend time.

Per usual, I enjoyed your voice.

Attached here..not by gravity alone,
Robert William



( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: July 3, 2009 )

Death
Thanks Robert for taking note of this poem and commenting on it.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: July 4, 2009 )

In A Strange Land
R.K.Singh;
I liked this piece for what you said in your distinctive voice! Not only is it 'Rectified' but 'Electrified' as well. I really enjoyed these words as your 'electrified' pen moved with observance.

"As stranger we come
As stranger
We pass"

You know R.K.Singh, you are so right! We are strangers, living in a strange land just passing through, for this is not our home. Excellent Write, enjoyed very much.

Vessel - {{{JEANNIE45}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 12, 2009 )

Death
Thanks, Vessel. I feel encouraged.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: July 13, 2009 )





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