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Here is my circle
find your own
this is mine

I can show you mine
but it probably won't matter

Others have been sharing
forcing
throwing
raking
hammering
refining
and marketing theirs
since the circle
came about

I see now
that tracing
and listening
offers little
other than the road well traveled nerve damage
of tracing
and the missed syllables
of listening

Yours starts here
or there
it's impossible to tell
but you will know when it ends
because you will be facing the beginning
with full understanding
of the journey around

then you start your second
to complete your infinity
and in the end
you face all beginnings
and all ends
and know

Here is my circle
find your own
this is mine




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