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orget it, I don't think true love exsists,

I say it in anger, hands become fists.

How can I hurt like this, what did I do,

face the facts this time we're through.

From butterfies,

to sorrowed cries.

Enter love, come as you are no games,

here for long, or just to entertain?

Creap up on me, when I did'nt need you,

then cheat on me, after all we've been through.

I don't ask questions, I just feel,

the need for it, to be so real.

Cast your spell, hypnotize my heart,

capture me, watch me fall apart.

Like I never knew what love did bring,

from the first kiss to the wedding ring.

Have you fallen, did it let you down,

next time be cautious, when love comes around.





------
krazi-Renee


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