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Enough?
by sunshineangel (Member) - published: June 19, 2009
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Category - Poetry
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When is enough, enough?
Words seem to lose their reality.
Giving has lost its way.
Truth is hidden in the shadows.
Riddles emerge as a daily routine.

sunshineangel


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by sunshineangel

Enough
This is short yet really goes deeper than expected. It really illustrates how a lie can change someones entire outlook on life. Nice work!

( Posted by: woalook100 [Member] On: June 20, 2009 )

Symbology
Made me think of what language and words really are. What is the reality of words when examined? Are they merely a created form of communication allowing humans to interact an a higher level even forming ideas solely from the words, or are they a program, controlling the way we think through how they are constructed... or both, or neither, or something much much stranger.

( Posted by: ripshark [Member] On: June 22, 2009 )

enough
Nice work. I am always amazed that words do shape reality. The problem is that if you actually use a dictionary and not listen to talking heads, explaining what was meant, you realize we are all being hypnotized. 'NO, that is not what that word means.' All Despots use language. The bigger the lie, with the most eloquent turn of phrase, the more horrible the evil. The best Politicians are the ones that can keep the truth in shadows and weave fabulous riddles. The best Poets cast light on the shadows and reveal the answers to the riddles.
Small poem - great depth!
Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: June 23, 2009 )





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