U Love Her
by FireFly747 (Member) - published: June 19, 2009
Word Count: 25 Word Bytes: 180 Viewed: 196 times
Category - Poetry
© Copyright by FireFly747

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Don’t stand and
Wait for her
She deserves
Much more
Embrace her
At the door
Wrap her
In your arms
Say that
U Love her

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The following comments are for "U Love Her"
by FireFly747

Short and Sweet
This is a very endearing piece. I like how the person in the poem realizes his lover needs much more than what he is giving her. It is to the point but still makes you take a second glance at how you treat the ones you love. Nice work!

( Posted by: woalook100 [Member] On: June 20, 2009 )

Say that U love her
This is so beautiful! While so many others spin out "How do I love thee", you kept it simple, pure, and true.

-Aubri

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: June 23, 2009 )

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