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Here is a country tune. I welcome your comments - but I really like this one! ;) I have been pitching this one for years.

I DON’T WANT YOU

It started with fire and burning kisses
It was magic and wonder in the night
Like poetry and music songs for the season
Dreams and reason it all seemed right

I don't want you - I don't want you
I don't want you to go away

It cooled in the daylight, listen to the worry
Money and things just got in the way
Afraid to lose what didn't matter
Worked and weary, too much to pay

I don't want you - I don't want you
I don't want you to go away

The light has dimmed and now you're leaving
Looking for that fire in anothers eyes
I'd like to find that magic in that old song
Please baby - please baby why don't we try

All those years what was it for
You told me you don't love me no more
No more
No more

The music's done and the dance is over
We don't listen when we both know we're right
Ain't it sad when the story's over
Love is gone when it's easier to fight

I don't want you - I don't want you
I don't want you to go away
I don't want you to go away


ken lehnig(c) 2001 Desert Windsong Pub.
www.isound.com/burninmg_sage_band



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Why is doing what you love the hardest thing to do? Is it because failing what you thought defined you would be too devastating a thing from which to recover? If so, we stay where mere accident has left us.


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The following comments are for "I Don't Want You"
by jonpenny

Song
I like this, i can see it being catchy. "Ain't it sad when the story's over
Love is gone when it's easier to fight" - my favorite line. So true. Nice work!

( Posted by: woalook100 [Member] On: June 24, 2009 )

I don't want you/song
Sorry I didn't catch your comment. Thank you very much for commenting.
Bless you

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: June 26, 2009 )





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