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winged gladiator 
hovering above the crick-crock world 
tearing apart shell 
letting time stand still 
atleast until breath takes hold

------ -- i'm scared, mommy.

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The following comments are for "dragonflight"
by po

Your poetry is in a very cryptic style. Every single word needs to be thought about to consider what you were trying to say.

All that makes it a little hard going to read, and I don't think I've got as much out of this piece as I could have.

Still, it's an interesting piece of writing. Score 7/10.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: May 5, 2003 )

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