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haiku thunderstorm.
by johnjohndoe (Member) - published: June 7, 2009
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Category - Haiku
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the sky was blacker
than midnight and restless with
thunder and lightning


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by johnjohndoe

Nice
Only thing I would change may be is the wording of the last line.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: July 26, 2009 )





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