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In the distance lies the mountain
Sleeping in my soul
As the rain is softly falling
With a wind that blows so cold

If you listen to the heartbeat
Feel the life that courses through
You will know that in the distance
Lives the path that waits for you

When the pain is overwhelming
When the trails are filled with tears
You can hear the mountain calling
Reaching out within the years

Chance is something that must happen
As you slowly look around
Life will never be straightforward
Never built on solid ground

Like the mountain in the distance
Ever changing standing still
Like the wind that blows round it
Moaning softly filled with fears

You must know what you’re seeking
You must know where to start
Or like the mountain in the distance
You’ll be lost with in the dark




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