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I had to taste my tears, for it's been so long,

I had to face the consequences, and know that I'm wrong.

He never understood what it felt like for me,

having a dream in life, for what I could be.

If I am wrong, which in fact might be true,

I could'nt stand it no more, the pain we must go through.

His eyes glared at me, I knew what he felt,

but I did'nt control the cards that love has dealt.

He looked like a puppy losing it's mother,

I wished we never met, why could'nt I have been another?

The wind blew us back and forth, from good to bad,

I may have givin up only the only love I had.

Tell me, what does it take to love what you've lost?

Tell me, how do you cover the expense of a pricless cost?

I don't understand, you get love then you want it to go away,

But I guess that's the story saved for another day.


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