Make You My Love
by jonpenny (Member) - published: May 21, 2009
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Category - Lyrics
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Sorry, I haven't been around for awhile. - Here's one to jump back in - a little moon-june love song, with a little darkside undertone.

In the heavens or on the ground
Makes no matter where you’re found
I’m going to find you and make you my love

You can sail across the seas
You will never be far from me
I’m going to find you and make you my love

Over the mountains of the moon
Snows of December or the warmth of June
I’m going to find you and make you my love

You know you love me - you know its true
It don’t matter what you do
I’m going to find you
Give you this ring
Please don’t worry
About a thing
I’m going to find you and make you my love

In the valleys - in your dreams
In the clouds and in between
I’m going to find you and make you my love

Wherever you are on the earth
In my heart I hold you first
I’m going to find you and make you my love

You know you love me
You know its true
It don’t matter what you do
I’m going to find you
Give you this ring
Please don’t worry
About a thing
I’m going to find you and make you my love

www.klstoryteller.com
© Desert Windsong Pub.

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Why is doing what you love the hardest thing to do? Is it because failing what you thought defined you would be too devastating a thing from which to recover? If so, we stay where mere accident has left us.

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The following comments are for "Make You My Love"
by jonpenny

Stalker
Fabulous lyrics. Remember the song by The Police? "Every Breath You Take Every Move You Make I'll Be Watching You". I would tone down the stalker borderline quality just a slight dash.

( Posted by: CoffeeWorld [Member] On: May 22, 2009 )

love
Lena, thank you for the big number for a liitle song - most kind, as always. Bless you!

CoffeWorld: I love coffee - thanks for the grand number. I have to tell you that my intention was to write a simple little song with some poetic depth beyond the words. Ah, the arrogance of poets. ;) I remember an interview with Sting , he registered shock that couples were telling him that 'I'll Be Watching You' was their song. There may be some of that in this one - the difference being that it was my intention to be darkly clever - maladroitly.
You are gracious thank you!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 22, 2009 )

So Hot,Bothering,&Charming
Oh, my! YEAH! Sometimes you've got to chase 'em, pin 'em down, tie their wrists, and just give 'em a... well, excuse me, I had better settle down. Getting a little too excited by this steamy, steamy poem of yours, Brother Ken. It's the sincerity behind it for sure. Very good.

( Posted by: TheTesticularPrancer [Member] On: May 24, 2009 )

making you
Thanks my friend for the grand number and for getting into it! :)

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 27, 2009 )

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