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What has gone wrong? Is there a soul left on this planet that believes and lives their life like our grandparents taught? The stuff like: Compation, honer, loyality, family, dedication, and faith. Is there anyone left with good strong moral values, self respect, trustworthy? I feel surrounded, sufficated, and hunted. Out numbered and closed in on. Why now after all this time is it wrong to feel this way? A geek, an outcast is how your treated now that everything has turned around in the opposite direction. How els am I to feel? Exactly as I do. Im not the one sucked off balance and shoved outside the path. It just doesnt seem worth it to hang my head down in shame. Im not to blame. I stayed the same. Its the world that has changed.

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Leslie Schopf



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