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braided hibiscus
subtropical storm endured
blossom peeks at clouds



5.12.09

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Imagination is future tense.






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The following comments are for "design"
by Bobby7L

i always enjoy
you poems. this one is real good.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: May 13, 2009 )

Bobby's "design"
Uh-hmmmm...knowing your style, I know that this has a much deeper meaning, probably quite complex and multi-layered, but to me, it felt it described the weather here today in upstate NY...ah, yes, I am a simple creature, content in my mantra meditative world of my home and garden, puppy walks, sipping coffee with my friend at his coffee shop, and of course, lots of time with my family;-)

Nice.


Tashi delek,

Karma
www.myspace.com/msjanemsjane

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Admin] On: May 14, 2009 )

of our "design"...
jjd,
Grazie.

TRKTL,
There is indeed a metaphorical level to this 5/7/5- on surface, an initial level..and of course, there's also the subliminal, subconscious level.

Extravagant number noted.

Looking around and within,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 15, 2009 )





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