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Listless, 
Pondering a sudden defeat 
Under the relentless sun 
Baking my body 
Like a giant furnace 
I relinquished my sword 
Baring the wailing of the wounded 
In bitter surrender. 
 
In an unwritten scene, 
In an unwritten epic, 
Two falcons hovered in circles 
Screeching calls of doom 
Piercing the depths 
Of my soul's sobriety 
Yearning for eternal childhood. 
 
Four horsemen in black, 
Silent messengers  
Stood around me 
As the falcons attacked each other 
In a bloody act of folly 
Like greedy crows 
Feasting on carrion. 
 
With tears in my eyes 
I looked around 
To see what I could find 
Of the land I fought for 
The land I no longer remember. 
 
And all I saw 
Was an emaciated cow 
And a dead horse 
Floating 
in a blood-red river.  
 


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S.N.V


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