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Old Bones Telling Lies
by FireFly747 (Member) - published: April 27, 2009
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Category - Poetry
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Burgundy eyes
Dry bones
Telling lies
Leaving behind
This trail of
Sacred tears



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by FireFly747

poewhit
In such a few words that capture a quagmire of history.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 29, 2009 )





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