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The Rhyme Apocalypse
by tinsoldier (Member) - published: April 15, 2009
Word Count: 43 Word Bytes: 264 Viewed: 142 times
Category - Poetry
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Quick, Mick, kick!
Heck, Jack, pack!
The shit is hitting the fan!
So run, it ain't no fun!
No, Jo, just leave 'em and go!
Find a safe place and stay low!
My, Ty, what's with the sigh?
You're gonna be blown sky-high!


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by tinsoldier

Rhyme
'Get out the back jack. Need a new plan Sam' I liked the clever concept but I got stuck in the Paul Simon song. Not really fair to you though because it's pretty cool.
Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 15, 2009 )

@jonpenny
I love that song!

This was a quickie that came to me when I was experimenting with rhyme.

( Posted by: tinsoldier [Member] On: April 29, 2009 )





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