Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote Interesting title and poem: ("...stillborn dreams") What intrigued me most was considering the person the poem was written about. Are you writing about yourself or someone else? I mean, are you as unhappy as your poetry suggests? I’m sorry but I just don't dig your shit, man. But it's no big deal because I stole your fucking book. That’s right! I stole your fucking book and I’ve been using it all winter instead of toilet paper.

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