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I sit here dreaming of you.
At night the same thing.
The weight on my chest is devastating me.
It is unbearable.
I love you so much.
I just wish you knew that.
I doubt you ever think of me.
Always wondering if you do.
I have tried to love someone else.
Exactly like you asked me to do.
I have tried to forget you.
Tried to erase you from my memory.
I walk the night thinking of you.
Feeling the ever present shame.
I am unfaithful to him.
Ever thinking of you.
I am horrible to him.
Never giving him my heart.
Never letting him in.
All my waking moments are yours.
My mind revolving through the memories.
I think about what you like.
I think of what you want.
Hoping to somehow please you.
Dreaming that one day youíll love me.
Itíll never happen though.
So I'll dream my life away.
Praying that it will please you.
I will try to move on.
I will keep trying to love him.
My thoughts ever unfaithful.
I will keep you in my thoughts evermore.
I am yours forever.
I love you eternally.
My love for you is timeless, endless.
My soul is possessed by you.
Thank you.

"Ink drips from the corners of my mouth. There is no happiness like mine. I have been eating poetry."
-- Mark Strand

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