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Spring it Forward
by drsoos (Member) - published: March 1, 2009
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Category - Poetry
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Short days
Long nights
I need my equinox

Feelin’ sadd
need lights
Give me spring equinox

Twelve hour days
and shrinking nights
feed my daylight appetite

Unhibernate
I’m feelin’ great
I been feelin’ my equinox

Welcome Spring
Fuck you groundhog
I got my equinox

Now fuck off clouds…

Blue sky hi...



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"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson




"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins













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by drsoos

Spring
Funny! With this new storm it would seem the good mother Nature cares not our understanding of where the sun rises and will just do as her whim dictates.Good job!
Thanks
Ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 2, 2009 )

@dagger re: spring
Dagger and others, I appreciate response. This sort of worked from rhythym of ZZ Top's "Sharp Dressesd Man", the theme of my grooms' party some time ago. "Every girl's crazy 'bout a sharp dressed man!" You had to be there, I wish you had.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: March 2, 2009 )

Cabin Fever!
You've got that right Droos...I don't take the car out in this weather...I'm beginng to feel as though I have cabin fever!

Funny, funny write!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: March 2, 2009 )

Why r u DELETING ur own posts Soos?
Spring is around the corner, a fresh new day is here;-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Admin] On: March 12, 2009 )





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