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Facing all my fears but losing all my mind
I was hoping I could see you one last time
Expression of my feelings don't effect you
I guess there's only one thing to do


Find a new lover to help me with my life
To consider my options, to be by my side
To pick out my clothes and love me so close
But how can I really know?


If she loves me


Thinking of you only makes me feel worse
Your eyes, so piercing - the obvious source
I would gaze into them willingly and think I could fly
Please someone let me die


I wish I could
I know I should
When can I go?
When will I know?


I need to find a new lover to help me with my life
To consider my options, to be by my side
To pick out my clothes and love me so close
But how can I really know?


If she loves me


Losing my feelings is encountering strife
I've never felt this bad, so bad in my life
I'm waiting for your call
You know I want it all
You know I want it all


I need a new lover to help me with my life
To consider my options, to be by my side
To pick out my clothes and love me so close
But how can I really know?
How can I really know?


If she loves me.

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Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?


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