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Formidable, critical, overly omitable
Light shines its brightest at night
Ambrosial, disdainful, words are not sayable
To be made is to understand


That life is a figure of speech
A losing competition of acidic lies and dreams


Adornable, scornable, unable to be formable
Displaying your soul in your sleep
Excitable, rightable, increasingly fightable
Losing your thoughts in a craze


But I don't get it when losers emphatic
And surprises scare not entice
But I don't give a care; I know life is a dare
I wont die, I wont lose the fight


Crazy thoughts don't impale me
I'm not blind, I can see


That life is a figure of speech
A losing competition of acidic lies and dreams


But life isn't all that discreet
That losing competition is your side street to me.

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Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?


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