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Chapter 3
"The Ride Back"

Heiltix knew that the trip back to Falconcrest wouldn't be a happy one. The people there were not used to having citizens die, ecspecially a member of the Elite 7. The last death from the group came over 40 years ago when one of the original founders died of old age. A huge ceremony was held and the whole city was grieving for a week. Heiltix didn't even want to guess how long people would be grieving now that 6 members had died.

The only good thing that came from the trip, other than defeating the goblin city, is that the time away from home wasn't long, only 4 days. Also the cities seer told the people the correct date to expect the Elite 7 back, but they wouldn't expect to only see 1 member returning home.



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