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Be mine forever, I will be by your side.
Do not shatter my heart, I will never hurt you.
Hold me close, I will never push you away.
I love you, I always will.

You make me feel safe and loved.
You make me feel free and happy.
You make me feel as though I am tresured.
You make me not hurt when I am sad.

I am silly, stupid, foolish, and more fragile than I will ever tell you.
I am broken, please do not throw me away.
My fear makes every moment that much more beautiful.
This probably won't affect you like I want it to, but I do not care.

You may not think you are perfect, but I never could.
Every imperfection makes you all the more enthralling, all the more amazing, to me.
I love ever bruise, scrath, flare of temper, joke, follish comment, and everything else that make you yourself.

Every time we are together, I fall more in love.
Every day we are apart, I miss you.
Every time you pull me to you, my heart skips a beat.
Every time I hear your voice, I smile.

When you touch me, I feel like something precious.
When you hold me, I feel loved and safe.
When you make love to me, I feel like a goddess
When we are together, I never want you to leave.
When I think of you, I can not help but smirk, just a little.

If this is a dream, I hope I never wake.
If this is insanity, then I embrace it.
If this is real, I hope it never ends.

Dear god, I am a sap.
Oh well, one more reasson for you to think me insane I guess.



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