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The leaves are black letters on the grey sky.
I watch it, lying in the memory-green grass.
Bronze ring, the sun drowns in the clouds.
No sound shakes this brave new world.
Poison is the sky, asp-green poison's the earth
And that gives the bravery of this beautiful lost world.

------
Stille


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