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haiku winds.
by johnjohndoe (Member) - published: January 11, 2009
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Category - Haiku
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in winter when the
leaves turn red and the winds blow
cold across this town.


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The following comments are for "haiku winds."
by johnjohndoe

haiku winds...
Indeed.

senryu on,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 12, 2009 )

Nature of haiku
Traditional haiku deals in some way with nature- as does this; although it reads like a western.

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( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: January 12, 2009 )





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