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I am the law of the criminal
I am the cold in the flame
I am the conscience of murderers
I am the pride within shame

I am the sunshine in winter
I am the star in your sky
I am the hope of the hopeless
I am the truth in your lies

I am the spark within darkness
I am the sacred profane
I am the one who will slay you
I make you live again

Book of Hymns 5:1-6

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The following comments are for "Anthropolis: I am"
by JonnyT

love this G-dly inspiration...
Thanks for posting it..."I make you live again"..perfect'-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Admin] On: January 8, 2009 )

@ JohnnyT
What is the Book of Hymns?

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Admin] On: January 8, 2009 )

@OchaniLele
Thanks for the feedback all :-).

This forms part of Anthropolis, a story being posted to my blog ( http://hernameisomega.wordpress.com ) and in a number of posts here. Parts of the story are told in the form of excerpts from the holy texts of one of the groups in the story, including this.

( Posted by: JonnyT [Member] On: January 8, 2009 )

@ JonnyT
That's wonderful! You're using your online blog and litdotorg to develop your work!

I'll pay careful attention to your posts from now on. This is one of lit's purposes -- to be a "bootcamp" for writers. I'm sure with all the eyes around here reading, you'll get plenty of comments that just might help you develop what you're working on.

I love creative people!

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Admin] On: January 8, 2009 )





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