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theres only a few differences to a madmans dream 
he sees the truth, if you know what i mean 
he knows the real difference between wrong and right 
and controls that thin line between darkness and light 
he can tell you what you really are thinking of yourself 
and he knows when youve banished thoughts to the back of the shelf 
he sees people for what they really are  
and he can see your real side even if its buried real far 
so weve locked him up in a clean quiet asylum  
while his crooked gaze still equals the dirty sum 
of the fears we refuse to face and the lies we accept  
and the fact that our lives boil down to nothing so we reject 
his insights and his moral pyschosis  
and return to our plight of playing the unwilling hostess 
to millions more who have the same questions as us 
as we all blindly struggle toward hopeful happiness

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