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Sometimes one doesn't feel inspired

The world feels huge, craggy, indomitable
The universe, unthinkable
You rub in small circles with knuckles on smooth flush cheeks, thinking

Wish it were warmer outside

Watching those go by, do they have souls?
Do they see with the eyes of stars and suns?
Do they know that they're all going to die?

No time to do anything, anything but wait.

Figuring with dirt and wood chips
Draw my thoughts in shifting sand, soon gone
Draw a wide circle, encompassing it all
Maybe...

Maybe it's a circle
Maybe we are the key to ourselves
Maybe all our thoughts, preferences, ideas, the people we meet and love
Were in us all along
No need to search so fiercely

Maybe...

Maybe we're not dead yet
Maybe the circle promises that we'll be here again one day
Maybe someone else was here before
Maybe the words sound familiar because they've already been spoken

A rhythm
Rhythms are comforting

And as you sit under the oak tree
Figuring and drawing in the earth
You rub small circles with knuckles on smooth flush cheeks, thinking
Thinking those cheeks are warm with blood
You're still alive

And you feel the sun beam down warm and understand
Understand why you feel the grass grow under your feet


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The following comments are for "And I Can Feel the Grass Grow"
by strummerdundee

feeling the grass grow
This poem is so cool in so many ways, I just don't have the ability to express them. How you took not feeling inspired to such a thought provoking, interesting, deep beautifully written piece of inspiration.

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: December 31, 2008 )

I like...
I like this piece its warm and real.

A rhythm
Rhythms are comforting

And as you sit under the oak tree
Figuring and drawing in the earth
You rub small circles with knuckles on smooth flush cheeks, thinking
Thinking those cheeks are warm with blood
You're still alive

...nice.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: January 1, 2009 )

sun and grass
"And you feel the sun beam down warm and understand
Understand why you feel the grass grow under your feet".
It's been a while since I felt the sun's warmth on my back. It's been a while since I felt the touch of grass under my feet. This makes me want to go back home so I can taste the sun and grass ... and forget the seas for a while.
Glad to check this piece. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

( Posted by: ruthpenn [Member] On: January 3, 2009 )





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