Taste The Snow
by FireFly747 (Member) - published: December 21, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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Bright wild stallon
Display full stride
Gallop in this glory
Stand firm in
This journey
Show pride
In your place
Bring passion
Through your grace
Suddenly, that
Burst of joy
Awaken this
Ancient warrior
Then, God will
Let you taste
This snow

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The following comments are for "Taste The Snow"
by FireFly747

energy
I, too, like the energy of this poem, especially the notes on pride and passion. :)

As a proofreading note: the comma after God isn't neccessary if it is God that will "let you taste this snow." If "God" is meant to be an aside - as in "Oh God!" - then another word would be needed after "God" to indicate who is allowing the tasting.

( Posted by: Mandolin [Moderator] On: December 22, 2008 )

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